Hunting with my Dad.

WALT- write correct sentences

When we were writing our stories we had to make sure our sentences were correct and we also had to use the words green, bang, excited and found.

Hunting with my Dad.

Once upon a time we went hunting with my dad. I saw a rabbit in the green grass. I held the gun and shot it. When the bullet came out it went bang! I was excited that I shot it. I couldn’t find it but then I found it.

Reflection- 

2 stars- I liked that I did lots of writing and I also liked that I got to write about something I like to do. 

1 wish- Next time I want to add even more words. 

Question- Have you ever done this much writing?